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UNIVERSITI
TEKNOLOGI MARA
FACULTY
OF BUSINESS MANAGEMENT
DECEMBER 2012 – APRIL 2013 SEMESTER
English
for Academic Purposes (BEL 311)
Course Details
Course : Banking
Tutorial Group : JBM 112 3A
Lecturer’s Name : Miss ZuraidahBintiSumery
Title : Early Marriage Among Under Age Teenagers :
Causes
and
Effects.
Members:
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Names
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Matrix Number
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NurSyafiqahBinti Noor Azmi
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2011510275
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IzaniBintiZainal
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2011773327
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NurHakimahLaiyinahBinti Alias
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2011767727
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I.
Introduction
Undeniably,
the negative outcomes associated with early marriage and high school students
have the potential to affect not only to the underage teenagers’ life and
health but as well as the shortcoming perception from the society towards the
young adolescences. [w1]
II.
Body paragraph
A.
One
of the major reasons that the high school students marry at their early age is
because their families forces the teenagers to get married with the men that
their families have chosen.
a) Most of the families want their
daughter married early because they not have enough money to bear all of their
children and to ease the family’s economic burden (Sara, 2012).
b) If
the teenagers got married, their husband will take all the responsibilities
from their parents towards the teenagers (Indramalar, 2012).
2. Despite the problem of forced
marriage occurred among poor family, it is also happen to the rich families.
a) Some of the rich families want to expand
their business performance so they decided to marry their daughter with the son
of their business partners (Khan, 2012).
b) The chairman of the Union Parishad
marrying his son with the girl under 18 age and was carried the bride to the
father’s in law house using the helicopter and the chairman spent almost 10
million in the wedding event (Dhaka Sunday,2012 as cited in Khan, 2012).
3. The teenagers’ families want to use
them to settle down the family’s debt or want to use the entire dowry to pay
their debt.
a) Some of the families will force their
daughter to marry with the man that they have owe to finish all of their debt.
b) Sometimes their families said that
the brides do not have the right to use the dowry because they are too young to
have a lot of money, unfortunately, they use the dowry to pay all of their debt
(Indramalar, 2012).
1. The outcomes from marry at early age
will affect the teenager’s future life.
a) Women who marry in their adolescences
are more expected to experience the process of separation within 15 years of
their wedding (Gordon, 2010).
b) Teenagers who are marrying at young
age are 31% more expected to live in the poverty when she is older (Gordon,
2010).
c) There were less educational
achievement and limited number of schooling chances among the young married
girls (Haberland, Bracken, Parker, 2005).
2. The results from marry at early age
also will affect the teenager’s daily life.
a) Married teens have lower revelation
to currentnews and limited social networks (Nicole, Erica, Hilary and Chris,
2005).
b) The young teenagers who were married
earlier will have less household and economic power(Haberland, Bracken, Parker,
2005).
c) High school students who married
earlier will have lesser freedom of movement and capacity to seek health care
and family planning services. (International Women’s Health Coalition, 2011).
d) Marry at early age will rising the
chances of the teens will involve in domestic violence and sexual abuse.
(International Women’s Health Coalition, 2011).
C. The teenagers who are married early
also will have an effect on their health condition.
1. Most of the teenager’s husbands were
transmitted their diseases to the teenagers.
a) Based on the study, the teenagers
have the potential to get HIV if their husband is older five or 14 years than
them, because 30% of the teenager’s partners were having a numerous sex
partners before they get married (International Women’s Health Coalition,
2011).
b) The young adolescences may be
physiologically easier to get infection from HIV or other transmitted diseases
because their vagina is lack from the protective cells (International Women’s
Health Coalition, 2011).
2. Teenage girls who marry early will
also beaffected during their pregnancy period and on their childbirth.
a) The teenagers who get pregnant at the
age of 15 until 19 years old have higher risk to death during their pregnancy
period because their body is not strong enough and still at the growth stage
(International Women’s Health Coalition, 2011).
b) The young mothers will get the risks
and complications during the pregnancy progression which can affect their
babies’ weight and the babies have a higher potential to die(The Practice of
Marrying,2013).
3. The consequences from marry at early
age also will give an effect towards the high school students’ mental
condition.
a) The teenagers will suffering when
they got married at the early age because they cannot liveas a normal person like
their peer friends (Indramalar, 2012)
b) The teenagers only focus on their
responsibilities as the young housewives.
c)
The
teenagers were being forced to seek for a livelihood because of their husband
is not carrying their responsibilities.
d) The domestic violence’s in the
marriage also will happen and can affectthe mentality of the teenagers who are
not mature enough to do their responsibilities as wife and mothers at the early
age (Media Centre, 2011).
D. One other consequences from marry at
early age is the shortcoming perception from the society towards the young
adolescences.
1. The society will considered that the
teenagers who get married early have low level of education.
a) Based on the study, most of the
teenagers who get married early were not finishing their school learning (Mana Vue,
2000).
b) The teenagers are lack in term of concern
in college and inspirationfrom their parents and peers (Mana Vue, 2000).
c) The teenagers have poor study
behaviors (ManaVue, 2000).
d) Women who marry before the age of 19
are 50% more expected to withdraw from high school and four times fewer to graduate
from college (Lundberg, 1994).
e) High school students who marry at
their early age have educational and performance problems in school (Sanders,
1997).
2. The society will presume that the
teenagers who get married early were too exposure to social life.
a) There was too much social life among
the teens (Mana Vue, 2000).
b) The teenagers’ parents will arrange
their marriage because they have too much social life with their friends (Khan,
2012).
c) The desire to keep the family’s good
name and societal stand up because of the problematic teenagers (Khan, 2012).
In a summary, most of the teenagers and their families know about the
tremendous negative impacts of the early marriages, but they were still
preferred to ignore all of these impacts. These impact will affect not only to the under age
teenagers’ life and health but as well as the shortcoming perception from the
society towards the young adolescences. [w4]
1) [w3]They have many causes
but we think it’s so hard to differentiate what are the exactly the point among
the topic sentences of the effect.
2) They find the point that give many input to
reader.
3) We also think that this group have already
find many references and good point to support their topic sentences.
4) Even they
[w4]For
the whole outline, they follow the format that Miss Zu ask them to do.
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