MONDAY, 25/2/2013
Assalammualaikum. Hye guys. Meet you
again. Today we bring our laptop to the class because Miss Zu want check our
draft for the term paper. Miss Zu also gives our outline marks. My group gets
3.5 marks.The higher is Ika groups. They get 4.7 marks. Wow. Congratulation! I
want show my group outlines after she received and checked our outline. This is
our correction for our outline.
THE CONSEQUENCES OF HPV VACCINATION FREE INJECTION AMONG WOMEN
I.
Introduction
It is indeed true that without HPV Vaccination women all
over Malaysia still live in a perfect healthy life, however, Malaysian way of
lifestyle has changed the situation as recently failing to take the HPV
Vaccination will lead to negative catastrophes such as increasing sexually transmitted diseases, leading
to mental retardation and eventually will lead to fatal chronic cancerous death
cases.
II.
Body
Paragraph
A) One
reason for taking this HPV Vaccinations is to prevent cervical cancer caused by
HPV types 16 and 18 and to increase the immune response to the vaccine among
women
1. HPV
vaccines have the potential to reduce cervical cancer deaths around the world.
a) HPV
vaccines can protect women from cervical cancer and at the same time it can
help to decrease the statistic of cervical cancer deaths in the world to less
than 7,300. (Richard and Wu, 2006)
b) The HPV
vaccine also helpful in combating genital warts and it is also can defend
against chronic cancer such as cervical cancer
and precancerous lesions of the cervix. (Alexandra, 2012)
c) According
to Roden and Wu (2006) found that HPV vaccination may be the most effective
alternative to combat cervical cancer and other contagious virus.
2. Besides
to prevent the chronics cancer such as cervical cancer, HPV vaccines also give
the superior immune response for those taking it.
a) In
“Journal of Health Care and Law & The Policy,” (2007), the researcher
observed that the women who have shots the vaccine will have the highest
neutralizing antibody response from 1.7 to 2.7 times higher than the normal
women that not taking it.
b) In
“HPV Vaccine- Questions & Answers”, (2008), states that the vaccines
generate higher antibody that fights infection when given during their
teenagers period.
c) Condom
use can reduce the transmission of HPV between sexual partners. However,
because areas are not cover by a condom can be infected by the virus, they are
unlikely to provide complete protection against transmission of infection.
(Garland,2007)
B) Although
the HPV vaccine is a strong weapon to prevent the cancerous diseases, Malaysian
women should take this matter seriously as it can affect their health in many
ways.
1. HPV
is a common virus that easily spread by skin to skin contact during sexual
activity with another person and it will lead to sexual transmitted diseases.
a) Alexandra
(2012) has found that some of the parents uncomfortable with the fact that
teenagers were being aiming for a sexually transmitted diseases if they are not
taking the HPV vaccines.
b) HPV
is regularly spread by sexual contact, which influences lifestyle choices and
behavioral decisions. (Richard, 2006)
c) Loh
(2011) has found that there are more than 150 HPV related viruses can be easily
transmitted and at the same time it will cause some other impact.
d) In “The
Virginia Gardasil Law”, (2010) states that many people does not know
that they are infected by the virus from sexually transmitted because most HPV strains do
not cause pain or have easily recognizable symptoms.
e) Most of the
people think that using condom can be one of the alternatives to prevent them
from HPV virus but the virus still can be transmitted because the condoms cannot covered beyond on the skin.
(Carrie,2007 as cites in David, 2006)
C) The
lacking of information and unaware behavior about HPV vaccines can give
tremendous impact such as it will lead to fatal chronic cancerous death cases.
1.
Sufferers
who get the disease due to not taking the vaccines may
be not having any chance to recover again and the percent to die is higher.
a) According
to Loh (2011), 2,126 cervical cancer victims a year with 631 deaths and expected
the number will be increasing to 3502 women with 1118 deaths within a year.
b) According
to Christina, (2010) states that the people who do not take HPV
vaccine for their health, they are expected to potentially death is higher than
the person who taking it.
c) The
statistic of death cases from cervical cancer is the higher rather than the
death cases of car accident and most of the women still not unaware about this
fact. (2012)
d) In
“Vaccine Education Center”, (2013) assumes that every year, the total number of
deaths from cervical cancer is 300,00 and this show that the total of
worldwide.
Another reason of not taking the HPV
vaccine is it will infect the future generations and to engage in sexually
risky behavior. Future generations who engage with sexually risky behavior will
have the higher chances to get sexually transmit diseases as compares to those
who are taking the Hpv vaccination.
1. Nowadays,
many people just think that there no reason to take the HPV vaccine and
unknowingly it will give negative impact to their mental and to their future.
a) The
girls and young women who are not vaccinated against human papillomavirus (HPV)
will lead to engage in sexually risky behaviors (Salynn, 2011)
b) According
to William,(2003) states that the young women are easily to get negative impact
to their mental because the antibody are weak to against human papillomavirus
(HPV).
c) Based
on the Claudia, (2007), argue that the women who failing to get HPV vaccines
will affect the future generation to get a perfect healthy life as the young
women lack of the immune system to protect themselves from any fatal chronic
cancerous death cases.
III.
CONCLUSION
In a nutshell, a variety of reasons
which caused the importance of taking the HPV vaccine to increase the immune
response and to prevent cervical cancer had been recognized clearly. Failing to
get the vaccines will lead to increasing sexually transmitted diseases but it
also leading to mental retardation and eventually will lead to fatal chronic
cancerous death cases.
After that, we should leave our comment
at draft friends. This is our comment for Izani groups.
According to the demography journal
by Gordon b Dahl (2010), “women who marries young is 31 percentage points more
likely to live in poverty when she is older.” Meanwhile the population of
Council Analysis Of United Nations Country data indicates that in some places
of Bangladesh, Ethiopia, India and Nigeria at least 40% of the women were
married before age 15 years old and if the data keep growing during the next
decade, up to 100 million girls will be married during their adolescences.
These statistics are frightening and should not be taken lightly as it effects
their future life. Another cases is an experience from Zeinab who is marry at
her young age and currently is 26 years old. She was married at 10 years old
and gave birth to her first child at 12. As a result of giving birth, her left
side is paralyzed and her husband subsequently abandoned her. In order to seek
a livelihood, she sells potatoes. Moreover, she is unable to educate her
daughter because of her situation. From this situation, can we summarise that
marry at early age will give a chronic disease? Is it marry at early age will
bring the women’s life to become poverty? What is the perception from the
society? Will the society accept the
early age marriage nowadays? Undeniably, the negative outcomes associated with
early marriage and high school students have the potential to affect not only
to the under age teenagers’ life and health but as well as the shortcoming
perception from the society towards the young adolescences.[w1]
Marry at the early age is due to
several reasons. One of the major reasons that the high school students marry
at their early age is because their families forces the teenagers to get
married with the men that their families have chosen. This is because some of
the teenagers come from poor family. According to Sara (2012), most of the
families want their daughter married early because they do not have enough
money to bear all of their children and to ease the family’s economic burden.[w2] Because of lack in money, the parents are unable to provide
their children with the enough foods, clothes and good educations and to slove
this problems they tend to marry their daugther early. Despite the problem of
forced marriage occurred among poor family, it is also happen to the rich
families[w3] . A study by Khan (2012) found some of the rich families
want to expand their business performance so they decided to marry their
daughter with the son of their business partners. It happens when two families
are share partner of their company and in order to expand and lasting their
good relationship, they marrying their children and finally become an in law.
Furthermore, the teenager’s family forces the teenagers to get married early is
because they want to use the teenagers to settle down the family’s debt or want
to use the entire dowry to pay their debt. They will force their daughter to
marry with the man that they have owe in order to settle all of their debt.
According to Indramalar (2012), sometimes their families said that the brides
do not have the right to use the dowry because they are too young to have a lot
of money, but unfortunately, they use the dowry to pay all of their debt. Thus, all
parents should take many considerations before marrying their daugther.[w4]
There were many consequences from marry at
early age. One of the consequences is it will affect the teenagers girls’
future life.Gordon (2010)
indicates that women who marry in their adolescenes are more expected to
experience the process of seperation within 15 years of their wedding. This
shows the bad result for the teenagers as they aspect that they will live
happily with their loved ones and experience their family with full of love and
caring with all of their children. Gordon (2010) also argues that teenagers who
are marrying at young age are 31% more expected to live in the poverty when she
is older.For examples, a high divorce rate combine with low wages of the family
and also have a large family size had increase the number of the women living
in poverty. When they divorce, the women lost her hanging and will start to use
their savings. Soon, the savings will finish and they start to live in poverty.
Besides that, due to marry at early age, it also affect the teenager’s daily
life.Nicole, Erica, Hilary and Chris (2005) notes that married teens have lower
revelation to current news and limited social networks. It is because they have
to be the full-time housewife and were busy to manage their new life as a
family. Haberland, Bracken, Parker (2005) indicate that the young teenagers who
were married earlier will have less household and economic power than married
women. Mostly the married girls are often living with little authority under
the supervision of their new mothers-in-law and by that they have less decision
making power than married women. A study from International Women’s Health
Coalition (2011) found that high school students who married earlier will have
lesser freedom of movement and capacity to seek for health care and family
planning services compared to theircolleague. The teenager’s husband and his
family will restrict and control the teenagers movement because they are young
bride and still new to the family. As a result, the teenagers only feel burdened
and didn’t have the opportunity to enjoy their life. [w5] [w6]
Another one
consequences from marry at early age is the shortcoming perception from the
society towards the young adolescences. It is because of the society will
considered that the teenagers who get married early have low level of
education. When a married couple has time to learn or learning management would
be affected as well as the disruption of the physical and emotional will always
disturbed when learning. Interest to focus on learning will be reduced because
more attention to their marriage. Based on the study, most of the teenagers who
get married early were not finishing their school learning (Mana Vue, 2000),
this is because when every couple that marry in young age it will disturb
learning after have result life partnership (have child ) .They will focus more
in content and maternal health and baby. Apart from that finance will become a
bane to continue learning. After arising problem in their marriage will take
decision to end education. Mana Vue (2000) posited that the teenagers are lack
in term of concern in college and inspiration from their parents and peers.
They will be less a concern in the subject, this is due to all couples who
marry early, they will pay more attention to their marriage and to prevent the
lack of attention, love their conjugal relationship only think about
responsibility in the married to neglect their studies. Besides that advice
from parents will also be less because they thought that the responsibility to
educate and warn the children has expired and will assume that their children
are mature when married. Friends will also isolate themselves and reduce joint
activities, thinking that her married will only concentrate on the
responsibilities and require permission if you want to do work in a group.
According to Mana Vue (2000), the teenagers have poor study behaviours. Because when more focus in household namely
serve relationship couple, provide eat and drink, application aspect will make
their attitude change to worse because inattention in education[w8] .
Even worse if those stay same roof with great families and have a financial
problem, this will cause behaviour that is bad and idle in education because
busy searching part-time work. Lundberg (1994) has found women who marry before
the age of 19 are 50% more expected to withdraw from high school and four times
fewer to graduate from college. It is because more focus in couple and no time
to learn or revise lesson and no interest to learn more prone in other things.
They will think familial only until lose interest for their further education
to level that even higher. They will think how want manage their life after
they getting married because of that they already lost interest to their
education. A study by Sanders (1997) found high school students who marry at
their early age have educational and performance problems in school. This is
because they put on their life after marriage. They will not care about
education, education as well as their performance in school or at tertiary
institutions. They will think about their excitement after getting married to
neglect their studies. They will assume that subjects are not important in
those who are married. This which caused cause why students who are married at
a young age and has lost interest in education issues, education and their
performance in school or at tertiary institutions. The society will presume
that the teenagers who get married early were too exposure to social life. When
youth marry in age that is young, society will say they already too social. If
parents pay attention on their youth children matter like this will not happen.
Teens now have too given the freedom to them so they have no qualms about
shamelessly longer to do anything that is not supposed to do at their age.
Parents also do not play their proper role right way so that children are not
afraid of them and respect them more. According to Mana Vue (2000). There was
too much social life among the teens. They feel they can do anything because
they believe that their parents have been reckless if they do they are too
extravagant and daring to try something that they think its fun. Khan (2012)
states the teenagers’ parents will arrange their marriage because they have too
much social life with their friends. When something happens which humiliates
parents, parents will take easy way by marry their children without think their
children ‘future. Due to the, youth in this modern time already unabashed to do
things that outside their thinking reason they think their parents already not
care about them more. Khan (2012) indicates the desire to keep the family’s
good name and societal stand up because of the problematic teenagers. Parents
with acquaintance that many or influential will think of the good name of the
family because they ashamed when their children involved in social ills. They
are more think family's good name from taking attention on their daily life
children. When their youth children already blundered new they want to regret.
Therefore, parents should monitor and take note of the social life of their
teenage children to not too independent to do things. They have no limitations
when friends those problem students at an early age marriages occurred. If
parents play an important role and responsibility of their teenage children
about education problems will not arise and their teenage children will
continue their studies at a higher level and will think of their future
direction correctly.[w9]
In a summary,
most of the teenagers and their families know about the tremendous negative
impacts of the early marriages, but they were still preferred to ignore all of
these impacts. These impacts will affect not only to the underage teenagers’
life and health but as well as the shortcoming perception from the society
towards the young adolescences. According to Married Adolescents: An Overview
(2004), the parents must give an important role before they make decision to
marry their children[w10] . First of all
is the parents must know the partners who want to get marry with their children
very well. Furthermore, they must make sure that the partners are free from
transmitted diseases and the most important thing is, their children future
will be guaranty if they get married with their partners at the early age.[w11]
For
your information, tonight have a replacement class. So I must ready for the
next tasks tonight. I think that’s all. Thanks.
Bye.
[w1]The introductary paragraph is interesting and its give the reader want
to more read about the causes and effects.
[w2]This group write the citation with the correct format.
[w3]This group start the sentences with conjuction words. We think the
sentences will become “weird” and we think it is not suitable.
[w4]The concluding paragraph is related with the whole paragraph.
[w5]The concluding paragraph is related with the whole paragraph
[w6]We notice that, this group has find a lot of materials to support their
topic and they also put some of example to attract the reader to keep reading.
[w7]This group put a lot of citation into this paragraph.
2. We think they do not put the
concluding paragraph
[w8]This group start the sentences with conjuction words. We think the
sentences will become “weird” and we think it is not suitable.
[w9]Each paragraph must be balance. We think, they should cut off the point
and just take the main point to put into to the paragraph.
[w10]We think the citation is not suitable to put in the conclusion.
[w11]We think the concusion is not bad. We think they also can put more
suggestion and recommendation to make the conclusion more interesting.
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