Saturday 23 March 2013

Compare and contrast essay.

WEDNESDAY NIGHT.
 
Assalammualaikum.
Tonight our class at SL1. After arrive at there we give softcopy draft and draft peer editing at Miss Zu. Tonight we will do compare and contrast essay. Compare is similarities and contrast is difference. Before we do it, she teach us steps to do it. She want us put at least 1 citations for quotations and reference at paraphrasing. Today our topic is Bree Van De Kamp VS Lynette Scavo. Have 2 patterns.

 
Pattern 1:

Introduction:
Introduction stating the thesis statement.

Body paragraph:
Differences A & B
Differences A & B
Similarity A & B

Concluding:
Conclusion summarizing the main ideas or restating the thesis statement.

 
Pattern2:

Introduction:
Introduction stating the thesis statement.
 
Body paragraph:
Similarity & Differences about A
Similarity & Differences about B

Concluding:
Conclusion summarizing the main ideas or restating the thesis statement.
 
I group no 1. My members are Izani, Nina, Pika, Zubaidah and I. Izani and I do difference between attitude Bree Van De Kmap and Lynette Scavo in family management. She gives a few hours to do the essay. After that, she want combined and submit to her. Thanks Izani because help me to find the point. Hopefully, I will do the best after this. That’s all. Thanks you. See you again. Wait a minute, this is self editing and peer editing for Nawi groups.



 
 
 

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